The Mir
The MIR is down. Another step of man.The International Space Station is up.Our eyes pursue the rare, to understandthe outer matter, as the crucial cup.Hi-tech, the reach of mind, assumes command,with...
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I'm partial to topical sonnets, and you've put together a good one. I like all the compound words, which give it a middle english feel (more alliteration would further emphasize this)."Crucial cup" is...
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Hello--I think you deserve extra credit for fitting "International Space Station" into a line. My favorite passage was "New-writ signatures..." to the end of that stanza. I feel like I follow the...
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Hi Ambitious topic, I like what you did with it. I was having a tough time with the second line but I finally figured out how to say 'internashnull', haha. Rarified air? I read 'the cup' as the...
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Hi Eric, Tom and Meanwile:Thank you for your much appreciated commentary. To explain:"Crucial cup" That is meant, indeed, to be the surrounding universe, (in the singular at this moment, especially...
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